http://jox.dudesoffcampus.com/d/orca/topic/Writing-Hot-Stories.htm Writing Hot Stories Sat, 14 Mar 2009 11:18:05 GMT http://jox.dudesoffcampus.com/d/orca/topic/Writing-Hot-Stories.htm When guys write stories, I know they are just fantasizing about something they find hot. Good enough, but  I wish they good just learn to write a little better. I see so many stories that begin: " Sat, 14 Mar 2009 11:18:05 GMT http://jox.dudesoffcampus.com/d/orca/topic/Writing-Hot-Stories.htm#354